Thursday, October 16, 2008

We are there to stay!

President Bush wanted to put a wall in the border of Mexico so
immigrants don't come in. Later the government busted a bunch of people
that worked in factories and my dad was getting scare. It was a good thing
that my dad didn't get busted. If my dad would have been caught me and my
mom would have been devastated.

There is 1.2 million immigrants that are going back to where there
came from. At first I thought that my dad was going to be one of those
people but it wasn't. The president shouldn't be deporting immigrants the
government needs as here.

Other people say that immigrants should go back to where they came from. I sometimes agree because I see people liter and mess up the neighborhoods and I don’t like to see that. Also sometimes I want to order something by phone and I need to repeat it about 4 times. I get pissed out that I have to repeat myself more times I like it when I say it once and that’s it. This is why I like for the immigrants to go back where they came from.

5 comments:

hector said...

for me bush is scare of us the mexicans because he knows that if we live this country the economy will drop and also in 10 years there will be 75% or more immigrants in this country.
border? lol!

VIRIDIANA said...

I like how you started in your firts paragraph and how you put your own experinces with immigration but it was confusing, because you dont explain why they should stay but in your last paragraph you kinda said they should leave. was up with that KIDO!

poncho said...

ok HOW COME YOUR SAYING THAT IMMIGRANTS SHOULD STAY AND IN THE END YOU PUT THAT THEY SHOULD LIVE

Brenda said...

i think you should have included more details in your paragrapghs. but you did a good job at relating the topic to you and your family. you know how it feels like to be worried if your dad will get deported or not just like other immigrants out there. I guess your last paragrapgh was the one ms diaz was talkin about but that makes your argument be confusing because i dont know if ur against or with deportations!!

Jasmin Urbina said...

Omg u must of haved been scared and wondering if they would take your dad. Thank good it didn't happen becausemany immigrants do get deported.