Wednesday, September 24, 2008

The story of Joey Carlson




My name is Joey Carlson i was born in Atlanta, Georgia. i 'am 21 ears old i was kidnapped when i was five years old. My parents were trying to find me and I was scared and since then i have not seen my parents. i work with a bunch of slaves in a plantation picking cotton. I've been a slave for 16 ears and they have not ben so great. i had to get up 5:00 in morning to work. My master was a very bad man his name was Carlos Koslov he whipped the slaves 20 times but the whip had nails in the ends.




One day i was working in the field when i forget to pick up ten baskets of cotton and take then to the master's house. The master came to me and hit me with a stick in the head i was unconscience. After about three hours i regained conscience and my master got the whip and hit me five times in the back. i was bleeding alot and one of the other slaves put rags aroung my back. A week later i had like 10 scars in my back and they were long and still painful i couldn't bend as good before i had the scars. My master toll me that i still have to work he didn't care if was in pain.




My master whipped all the slaves as me. Some slaves try to kill the master but someone tells the master and kills them or him. Since the day i was whipped i had horrible dreams of my master whipping me, and the others and just imagine the nails in your back no one can help you if they did they will be killed. I watch how a friend of mind was getting whipped i can feel the pain that he is going throw. Then my master saw me watch the whipping and one of the slaves brought me to the master, and started to whip me.





One day i started to plan my revenge to kill the master. The day came the master was coming out of the restroom and i whipped him in the face and then i whipped his chest and two of the nails when in the boby and i rapidly took the whip of and pull out his skin. The master die and all the slaves were free and i was reuntied with me mom where I found her in Alabama.






3 comments:

Jasmin Urbina said...

Hello! :)...thats was a great slave narrative.but DAMMN that was a great revenge he got. whipping the master with the nails is just nasty lol...well it was good see you in skool

Ivan said...

Nice! the way you described how the slaves were being whipped and tortoured. Also it had a good ending!

Luis said...

good story man I think that some this parts where Real